Welcome to the preview for Twin Falls. A story for boys dreaming of living a better story.

Aloha! I appreciate your willingness to trudge through the first draft and help me improve the story. Even though it’s a rough draft, I hope you still find it enjoyable and relatable.


I’ll do my best to release chapters regularly, like a television series, so you won’t lose interest. Also, I look forward to hearing your first impressions and learning things like:


  • What part of the chapter do you remember most?
  • When did the story seem to drag on?
  • Did anything in the story confuse you?
  • Which character do you most relate to and why?
  • What makes you want to keep reading? (Or stop reading?)


Mahalo! -cj